My new poem, Baby's Breath?

Baby's breath








Baby's breath


is in my lungs


still I find it hard


to breathe


Because I've never seen


this gorgeous world


the way you let me


see.


And I am stricken by


your very words


The love you give to me


is a gift that lasts


forever


You're the bearer of


eternity

My new poem, Baby's Breath?
YOU ARE OVERWHELMED BY YOUR LOVER TO THE POINT OF DREAMING OF HIM.NICE POEM.
Reply:It's lovely.


I can easily get the meaning and the feeling you put into it, with just the shortness of it.


Keep it up : )
Reply:interesting... i love it
Reply:That's a REALLY great poem.

elaine